Three Treasures Poem by girish parganiha

Three Treasures

Rating: 5.0


I find these treasures
when I look at you:
the sun, the moon,
and the ocean blue.
Your smile is the crescent moon.
Waxing or waning it matters not.
When it goes away,
my smiles stop.
Your laugh is the sun
that brightens my day.
If it stopped,
I'd feel pain.
Your voice is the ocean,
so soft and quiet.
If you ever raised it,
I would fret.
I find three treasures
when I see you,
the things I can't live without;
the sun, the ocean, and the moon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 20 October 2008

Hey Dr. Girish, Very nice poetry indeed. Im glad you have found the 3 treasures in her the smile in the crescent moon the laugh in the effulglent sun and the gentle voice in the vast ocean. Keep smiling and writing such lovely writes A+++++ and 10++++++ regards anju

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Vaughn Bekker 23 May 2010

good one, three treasures indeed, keep writing....

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tara star 06 May 2009

very nice...thnx 4 sharing...its a treasure for us indeed..

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 December 2008

lovely poem..very natural10

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Miriam Maia Padua 01 December 2008

very sweet poetry..surely will make her heart dance with happiness...finding the three treasure because of her is just like finding all the treasures that makes your life glow...you and your poetry are her trasures too....lovely, lovely write that would tickle one's heart.......10 for this and a vote from me....

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Reshma Ramesh 24 October 2008

lovely love poem........well done

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