This Story About My First Love Poem by Yunlie Fontianty

This Story About My First Love



This story about my first love;
And I want to tell my feeling in my poem.

Since I meet you;
I don't know...what happen with me;
I always remember you in all days long;
And am feel lost my energy.

Oh my best friend and now become my love;
Although we are so far away;
But I can feel if we are so close in hearts;
We met upon the internet;
And then try to make friendship electronic.

Since I meet you;
I feel happy and joy in all my days long;
Hope our friendship become last and forever;
Until we can real meet face to face here.

~ Banjarmasin City,19th February 2010 ~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 22 February 2010

be it the wired love of the cyber world, or love in the real world, the feelings and emotions are the same..well written

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Dulakshi Wakista 21 February 2010

Well dne.You've expressed your feelings so lovely.You've portrayed the cyber friendship turned in to love.What a flow write.Keep on writing.

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Yunlie Fontianty

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