This Sky Is Bleak Poem by Adegbite Adeyinka

This Sky Is Bleak

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Toiling, tilling and digging with spud
In search of a meal, be it in the Earth
Our labour; hard, prolonged yet dud
Though wielding, not yielding; we are in dearth.

Our eyes are burnt and shedding blood
From begging the silent sky for a bud
One; plenty in harvest as we unearth
To fill our barns, our barns for afterbirth

Is our soul evil as a dark mud
That inflicts a loud pain of groaning Earth?
Or our soil as eerie as a scud
That scares the birds to lay or berth?

Our hands are dirty, we soiled our spud
The land has eaten up our bud
Even as it is buried in Earth to birth
Our hope for harvest will be a stillbirth

Thursday, May 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,hopelessness,vanity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem paints the picture of a hardworking person who often speaks on behalf of others who are faced with the same problems as he is (he often says "we" to suggest he is not in the situation alone) . However, as much as they work hard, they get no reward for their hard work as they are always lacking ("though wielding, not yielding; we are in dearth")

In the second stanza, they take to spirituality and beg for divine inspiration ("a bud")which they could put to use to fill up their lack now and those of the future ("To fill our barns, our barns for afterbirth") .

In the third stanza, he self-reflects to see what could be the origin of their problems. Whether it is their human nature that brings the havoc and causes the lack ("Is our soul evil as a dark mud... or our soil as eerie as a scud")

In the last stanza, they praise their hard work and effort to better their lots ("Our hands are dirty, we soiled our spud")yet they fear that the future may never be better ("Our hope for harvest may be a stillbirth")
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Simha 07 May 2020

The prospect of facing a failure or despondency is entailed in human life, or life itself of all beings. This exemplifies it. A lovely piece.

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