Thinking Of You Poem by Ariel Miles

Thinking Of You

Rating: 5.0


I sit
so damn dazed
thinking of your face
and your eyes....
hypnotizing
it's purely beautiful
your smile is heavenly
my happiness around you
hits an extreme increase
and you get me so tongue tied
I get so much butterflies
I think of you constantly
increasing the speed of my heartbeat
I took a picture with your name
so you and I are mentally together
my pen blessed the paper with your name
and with love my fingers kissed the letters
If I never get the chance to be with you
I still feel as if we've shared something deep
an attraction we thought was secret, but
everyone could see
What I feel for you is serious
but my chances are microscopic
and I hope in time you'll notice this
'cause I hold this where my heart is
daydreaming of you & I
when others let go
but to dropp the habits and
attraction
To others we seem to be attractive
But when I travel wrong
you're the reason I go
I dare to tell you how I feel
I'm only new to emotion
but the hearts that fill my notebook
have birthed a name
that even if we cease to speak I
won't regret

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
trisha evensen 15 May 2006

well i like this perfect as it is.......very nice

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jonni o 27 January 2006

Well, this certainly is a most appropriate title. 'My happiness around you hits an extreme increase.' - while I might have said it a bit differently, the sentiment is strong and very clear. j.

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