hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 68,679 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

They Are Loved - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

It is impressive show
As we watch children grow
Make home as heaven
Bring more of happiness even

As garden looks barren
Without colorful flowers in
So is the happy home
Without them we find no welcome

You can find lovely flow
In river’s water when they go
In stream by making noise
Children too make beautiful choice

How do they make and turn?
Whole of the house to shabby return
No feelings for break down
“So notorious: as they are known”

How many colors rainbow has?
So many but similarity in half round face
What a beautiful shows they present when appear?
I wish each household has children to hear

Their movement is really healing
The inside load with cute smiling
What a face they make when refused for something!
They are loved in home when beautifully sing


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  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2013 10:00:00 AM)

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    Ashraful Musaddeq lovely 7 hours ago • Unlike • 1 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    Soumitra Talukder So true Hasmukh ji, How often you actually admire the pranks of a child even when you are sermonizing, cause his Mother is annoyed! Are you but going back to your old days! 2 hours ago • Unlike • 1 Hasmukh Mehta it is sharing of joy a few seconds ago • Unlike • 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    Nur Meiyati Like the garden. Beautiful. Where is it? about an hour ago • Unlike • 1 (Report) Reply

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    Seen by 12 3 people like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome mary murray, amy barry n barbara boyd anderson a few seconds ago • Unlike
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  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    Timileyin Gabriel Olajuwon Thank you sir for sharing this. Love the last line. They are love in home, when beautifully sing. It conotes what they take.5 hours ago • Like (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2013 9:49:00 AM)

    Sabrina Abbott I want to polish your poem. Not change or rewrite it, just edit so as to define it's tense and draw out it's message even more so. This is fantastic work! Let me know if you are interested. I'll do it for fun.5 hours ago • Unlike • 1 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013


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