There Is Fire In Your Mind Poem by Unwritten Soul
There Is Fire In Your Mind
Among the hearts of gold
Or the sand one that you hold
I wont be fooled by the shine
I still bound to thine
There is fire in your mind
And it burns my skin
Each time you speak
But somehow it warms my heart
Though I burned till the end
But I rebirth as a phoenix
By the honesty in you..
It survives me
Though I've touched by the other subtle minds
Comfort me as if i were in the ocean of softness
So soft like the rare water from mars
But somehow they claim my life
As if I were killed without scar
Drown and I will never revived
Fooled by the lies
I may finally die
Here I sound like an insane
But from my mind and heart thought the same
'The golden hearts wont buy me
But the sand one is truly lively
Because when i cried on yours
The sand take all and
I let it be green eternaly'
I'll let the flower grows on you...
but sweet can be a mask of true agenda
but it can be real as well
A true companion will be the one that may speak truth
even its hurt, because the mission is to help us be better
And the way they tell not the same as sweet talker or enemy
But with the way of honest, care and concern
Friends are like flowers in our garden
Without them we still fine but 'the garden wont be that much beautiful'
True friends rise above romance as romance is not always true. Wonderful that you are not fooled by the shine yet we have to trust too. Beautiful words as always thank you for the notes too.
Thank you Lyn, its been a while not hear anything from you... hope you always fine there.... And about the poem...Sometimes we rather try to understand than judge...because judging friends and people without understand may lead us to false understanding.. see u again :)
The golden hearts wont buy me But the sand one is truly lively Because when i cried on yours The sand take all and I let it be green eternaly' I'll let the flower grows on you...haunting expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem shared startlingly. Thanks for sharing.10
There is such a unique style to your poetry- -your lines intrigue the reader, they must read on- - your meaning is a complex one except there are varied and multiple layers to the meaning and we must delve deeper with you and it is worth the time spent thinking and pondering. Most excellent poem and it delivers depths not shallows.
The truth and falsehood can share that common property.....the ability to burn through circumstances. They are like acid to copper. Yet the ultimate effect that each brings is radically different. Very thought provoking, Soul.
To understand it takes more steps before conclude something, senses can be fooled but we cant if we know the truth...I like your words, like acid to cooper...wonderful thing to imagine dear.
The golden hearts wont buy me But the sand one is truly lively Because when i cried on yours The sand take all and I let it be green eternaly' wooow, .... great
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I would like to translate this poem
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..........this is beautiful soul, I love your thoughts on honesty.... honesty is the foundation of all true relationships ★
Thats right sunprincess...it always true