Me, Myself and I

Rookie - 32 Points (12 october 1974)

Then You Left - Poem by Me, Myself and I

So then you left…


In a heap, lying on the floor,

I lie, panting, wanting so much more,

For you have all but gone,

The fairytale is over...

And I start to humm our song,

The erotic thoughts I still think,

Our glasses we drank from,

Are still lying in the sink,

Your smell on my clothes,

Makes me start to think,

But now your gone,

I hear the door slam,

And the taxi pull away,

And its all over,

Over before I had time to blink,

What the hell happened? ?

Or did I say out-loud what I think? ?


Comments about Then You Left by Me, Myself and I

  • Gold Star - 8,556 Points Amitava Sur (9/11/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    So emotional so hearting is the poem in deed. The perso whom you love so much when gets parted it is pearcing the heart and mind.... very nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,161 Points Charity Nduhiu (9/11/2014 3:54:00 AM)

    It is so hearting for someone to just brake up. I truly feel it. Very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,953 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/7/2014 11:59:00 PM)

    It pierces the heart my fello poet, yes! when the person with whom you share your joy and sorrow with, suddenly disappears. It happens often, and one must let go of such. Indeed, good friends we have, good friend's we lost. Beautiful and emotional piece of work....well done! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,953 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/7/2014 11:59:00 PM)

    It pierces the heart my fello poet, yes! when the person with whom you share your joy and sorrow with, suddenly disappears. It happens often, and one must let go of such. Indeed, good friends we have, good friend's we lost. Beautiful and emotional piece of work....well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Kirti Sharma (5/18/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    wonderful....
    I invite you to read my poems.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points marvin brato (10/23/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Nice one...expressive! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,748 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/21/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    A fairly good poem, but it didn't meet my expectation of what I wanted from 'the most popular poet'! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anonymous Logician (10/13/2013 10:53:00 PM)

    I like it, I really do - quite a powerful emotion conveyed here.
    Harmless suggestion: Correct your to you're in the following line:
    But now your gone,
    It may flow a little smoother for meticulous folks like me if you do. Still, though, thumbs up otherwise. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/22/2013 10:21:00 AM)

    Beautiful one. Liked reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,641 Points Ramesh Rai (7/29/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    nice one. keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,684 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/30/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    liked it................i invite you to read my poems.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,890 Points Patricia Grantham (6/27/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    A very nice straight to the heart of the matter love
    poem. Where did love go wrong after a beautiful
    meet. Loved and lost. i invite you to read my poems
    Love Seesaw and Love Potion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 178 Points Renee Maritz (9/21/2012 4:59:00 AM)

    like it! ........... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jennifer Louise Johnson (9/19/2012 1:48:00 AM)

    Is it possible that Me, Myself and I became popular because of your name Me, Myself and I which is a famous movie in America, and if people are searching google for it - they will see your profile. Maybe you should try to go with your real name- and see the real love for your work. - It is fair also that way for others. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (9/17/2012 10:35:00 PM)

    The sab part of lost love. Lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 251 Points Natasa To (9/10/2012 6:37:00 AM)

    The sad poem that i love. The following line that i read, pls check it again for an error
    ...The erotic thoughts I still think, ... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (8/27/2012 4:35:00 PM)

    A familiar story to many, and tact is often what's needed in a relationship. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,289 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/24/2012 7:28:00 PM)

    Many people can relate themselves to this poem..though simple, it is very effective! sad to read! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,843 Points Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (8/18/2012 2:35:00 AM)

    Yes, simple but deep with concrete images and nice flow of expressed emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 368 Points Metin Sahin (3/14/2011 11:05:00 AM)

    very simple but shockı ng. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 18, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 4, 2011


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