The Wind: An Extreme Instance Poem by Jagdish Singh Ramana

The Wind: An Extreme Instance

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What is the wind? -a flow in many forms,
What the bards have call'd thee
All are their melodious evergreen songs,
As a philocalist I see the wind in me.

Wind, a divine secret agent of the almighty,
Invisibly roaming over seas, soils and nature
For tidings of the colourful world slightly,
And the deeds, white and black of the creatures.

Wind, a messanger, takes the messages fairly
Of innumerable flowers' fragrances,
Sweetness of fruits, melodies of bird-songs, tastes of poetry,
And to the peasants love of animals' disturbances.

Wind, a bondage of love and peace
Amongst the diverse hearts of its creatures,
And for a painter, wind is a moving picture
Of far-fatch'd fields, blue skies and solitary seas.

Wind, a wander'r rolling up the fallen leaves
With her into the spelly paths making sound,
A Sufi singer; the song of herself can be listen'd
In a loud silence all around.

Wind, a great saviour, a transparent shelter,
Creatures, all the three, are under her absent presence,
They find haven in heaven of the lady defender,
The wind is wind, an extreme instance.

Tuesday, January 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical ,wind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An idea struck into my mind while commenting on a poem "The Wind" by Elizabeth Padillo Olesen and specially thank you dear madam.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valentin Savin 04 March 2019

Well done. " As a philocalist I see the wind in me" . Quite an interesting definition and comparison of the wind and yourself. Like the wind a person can be calm and violent. We have to restrain ourselves. I liked your poem from the very beginning.

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thank you, sir, for this encouraging appreciation.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 March 2019

U HAVE YET TO READ MY MOM'S SMILES R U FLYING AWAY LIKE THE WIND

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thank you, sir. not at all. the wind have touched your mom's smiles and gotten fragrance of love and peace.

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Rameeza Nasim 05 August 2022

Beautiful so true Wind is wind

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Jagdish Singh Ramanaa 03 September 2022

Thank you Very much for your kind words.

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Bharati Nayak 20 February 2022

Let me quote from this amazing poem-Wind, a messanger, takes the messages fairly Of innumerable flowers' fragrances, Sweetness of fruits, melodies of bird-songs, tastes of poetry, And to the peasants love of animals' disturbances.

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Bharati Nayak 20 February 2022

An exquisitely beautiful poem with great philosophy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

An excellent philosophical write.... appreciated!

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me poet yeps poet 31 January 2021

philocalist I see the wind in me MEANS

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