The Way God Works Poem by john tiong chunghoo

The Way God Works

Rating: 5.0


the way god works
makes me feel
my mind in my foot
and my foot in my mouth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean North 29 March 2007

i like it as is john, though in my case the foot could be somewere else less comfortable, at times tooo :) , nice stuff JOHN

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John Tiong Chunghoo 29 March 2007

well, isaias, it is meant that way.

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Isaias Rendon 29 March 2007

sounds like a incomplete thought and poem

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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