The Wake Poem by Joe Hughes

The Wake

Rating: 5.0


You lie peacefully now,
Ravaged by the growth within -
I saw the Grim Reaper harvest you by stealth,
Whilst Bacchus rested.
Your Raglan Road woman
Weeps copiously downstairs -
Your wife fears to enter.
Gallons of tea are swallowed
In teetotal rooms.
Horrible, Italianate sympathy cards
Disturb my prayer over you.
I kiss your sweaty forehead,
Embarrassingly recoil
As I realise the wet is Holy Water.
I pee in your toilet,
Scan your bathroom shelves
Where your throw away razor lies
Full of your bristles
Whilst you've become disposable.
Back in your room
Your banjoless fingers sit
Entwined in green Rosary beads
Never worn in life.
There was a time I wouldn't have come,
Now, I'm glad to be here.
The flickering candle breathes,
I breathe - you breathe elsewhere.
No stage here,
No pub fuelled chatter,
No bullets to bowl,
No close harmonies,
No mother to avoid,
No new dawning of your day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 20 November 2012

Extremely touching! I am shedding a few tears! It was the anniversary of a death the other day! Here one min, gone the next! Thanks for sending me over to this poem! (bullets to bowl..... Fantastic expression)

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William Stoneberger 01 June 2009

nice job...vivid images that make it all very familiar...

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Sandra Martyres 20 April 2009

A grim poem, but beautifully written...Death is always painful.....Thanks Joe for telling me about it...

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