The Universe Is Unfolding Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

The Universe Is Unfolding

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When the inner spark of the soul
is plugged in
with a blend of complex and simple mind;

When the wandering, vagabond mind
lingers unintertuptedly
In curly thoughts and twisted feel;

When the feel senses
the immortal reality and
Decorates the grief stricken heart;

When the pale heart is
Rebounding with abnormalities
To mend the nightmarish broken wings;

When the unbeatable powerful wings
Of the reckless mind
Carries within the inner beauty;

When the beauty of the past errors
been scrutinised
Compelling to foresee the unpredictable future goal;

When the goal acts with the
precision of mind and perseverance of heart,
to passionately love the present;

When I dare the present,
to touch the unreachable sky
I realised that THE UNIVERSE IS UNFOLDING......

Monday, July 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: truth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Secrets of the universe is unfolded for us to explore it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 18 July 2016

to touch the unreachable sky, good one..

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Thanks a lot dear poet, receiving new positive comments really enthralls, the enchanting mind, I am blessed thank you dear sir, welcome

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 July 2016

Life! ! 'In curly thoughts and twisted feel'. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks a lot for ur first positive response of all my poems, I extend my dear gratitude to ur generosity, welcome dear

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