The Unfinished Note... Poem by Pawan Khanal

The Unfinished Note...

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It was dark and yet was bright, your life.
Comfortable you were within in your lies.
Long I stood banging the walls.
But I could not break it!
Long I thought about your cold leaden room,
All misty and foggy, it loomed.

Yet it was dark but it was bright!
And there was still a better side.
All I had to do was break down your walls.
So that you would see the lingering light.
Hoping that you would be by my-side.
But you said good-bye leaving me an unfinished note.

Monday, September 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 12 September 2016

An emotional an nicely written piece, Pawan. Thanks

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Pawan Khanal 13 September 2016

You're welcome Kelly!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 September 2016

Love and dreams! It was dark and yet was bright. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pawan Khanal 12 September 2016

You're welcome. It means a lot to me! :)

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