The Twilight Of My Years Poem by Richard Wlodarski

The Twilight Of My Years

Rating: 5.0


From this moment of death sentence
I promise you I will move on
I will rise to the shining sun
Even when clouds obscure the day

From this moment of life's death
I shall see such great rebirth
My faith in His Majesty
Overcoming my fear

From this moment of unknowing
When I shall breathe my last damn breath
When the sky shows no sun nor moon
Now the twilight of my years

Wednesday, November 16, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Another new lease on life! Praise The Lord!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 November 2022

TWILIGHT OF LIFE IS RINGING ON THE POETIC DICTION; AWESOME; MAY GOD LONG LIVE YOU

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Richard Wlodarski 18 November 2022

Mahtab, THX so very much for your wonderfully positive response. And for your very kind and thoughtful wishes for God granting me a long life. God has been so very good to me. I must be setting some kind of record for the number of times that He has spared my life!

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M.J. Lemon 22 November 2022

A hint of Blake, a dash of Wordsworth...and ALL Wlodarski. A brilliant poem, Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2022

Sincerest THX, Sandra Feldman for adding my poem to your favourites.

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Sandra Feldman 19 November 2022

God knows what he is doing. Your life, your visions, your poetry and grace, a very great contribution to the unstable, human race. Beautiful and very sincere poem, a veritable song from deep within your beautiful, soul.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2022

Sandra, sometimes when I'm feeling somewhat sad, I read some of the comments made by poets/poetesses on PH and they give me a burst of fresh energy. Yours are amongst them. And this series has so deeply moved me! Don't know where to begin to thank you for all of your support and encouragement!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 November 2022

Very fascinating poem, this magnificent poem deeply moves me, Top Score, Richard and to my Favorites

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Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2022

Sylvia, it makes me happy that my poem deeply moves you. THX so much for adding it to your favourites!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 November 2022

CONGRASTULATIONS, Dear Richard, today your poem is on Rank 61 of the Best Poems Of Member Poets of PH.5 Stars TOP Score!

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Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2022

Thank You so very much, Sylvia for bringing that to mine attention. I was not privy to this info. Many THX for the CONGRATULATIONS!

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