The Tree Poem by Keithrynne Faith

The Tree

Rating: 5.0


The Tree is so beautiful
.....it has so many leaves
.....it has so many flowers
'Hope it will last Forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hari Khabrani 26 July 2009

Yes Family tree is always bigger. I hope in short belongs to your small family being in small poem. Good write... Congratulations here.

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Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

very nice...short but meaningful poem...10 I have a children poem too..may be you like to read it...Diamond In My Garden...is the title

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Dragon Wizard 17 September 2009

Magickal One... You´ll be...You´ll be much better than your mother, much better than many Poets, you know why? Because that is your heart´s true desire! So grab your desire as a wild pony´s mane and never let go! Lovely poem! Kind regards, Dragon Wizard

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Kesav Easwaran 30 July 2009

kiddies' good poem tree...10

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dear...... you are at the stage God wishes all of humanity to be...... to see simplicity and its beauty and him in it..... you did a marvelous Job at this........... God bless you young one.

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 July 2009

From the eyes of a child, beauty speaks an innocent insights of nature and her dream...truthfulness shows this is so refreshing..and like you cute and the picture is so clear..trees full of richness and bounty like as full of hope for a green tomorrow... Faith, keep on writing.... you have the talent in you.... 10+++ lovelots, Tita Maia

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Afzal Shauq 26 July 2009

The Tree is so beautiful .....it has so many leaves .....it has so many flowers 'Hope it will last Forever a sweet poem by cute keithy fairy like 8 years old girl... I really enjoyed it and sure the family tree is sacred to child to climd on and to eat ripe fruit from it.. hope you are a good child of your parents and they must be proud of you... best of luck 10/10

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