My Cry Poem by Keithrynne Faith

Welcome welcome, dear Keithrynne. I read this beautiful and heartfelt yearning for your father in this simple yet fascinating style and I think you climbed few steps in that promising ladder to become a poetess of great potential. The task is not simple but I feel deep in my heart that you will accomplish it because I base my judgement on these two facts: First. Your style of writing at this tender age.It is smooth and creative and real, telling me I will see more of your work and I will keep an open eye for this. Second. Your mother is a great artist and she is very knowledgable of her craft and will shower you I am positve with good advice you need to realize your goals. May god bless you and open doors for you and grant you all you wish. Aziz

Welcome to poemhunter.com! Your father maybe a good father because I can see that you have expressed your love for your father very good. Keep on writing poems, who knows you may be one of the greatest poets that has ever lived!

Wow....a very nice thoughts and well written...a well expressed longing for a father...a very touching write..as I am father too, I admire you for this.... and you deserve a perfect 10....galing mo naman... and your ambition to be a poet keep it up...and I will read more of your work here...and hope so.. sabihin mo rin sa Mother mo baka pwede rin nya akong turuan...kasi magaling siyang mag turo..okey? (Joke lang ha)

Hello, Keithryne...WELCOME to PoemHunter.... All I can say...Like mother like daughter..surely will soar higher than her mom..lol You started so young Keithryne....and I am sure you will create a name in poetry.. This is a great start...a wonderful title..with great appeal very well-written..words to caress every father's heart...soft-flowing lines a write full of emotions...very innocent full of love and longing for your dad and willingly..wait for his arrival a wonderful cherishing moments...so sweet Keep on writing, Faith..Magaling ka...a brilliant young girl...it runs in your blood kahit ayaw aminin ng mommy mo...i know it runs in the blood... CTheart...congrats....you're so lucky to have a brilliant and talented young girl..soung and so beautiful... thanks a lot for inviting me in your first write...I'm am so happy...to be a part of your history in poetry...in your first embrace of poetry...God bless you Keithryne for this...10+++++++ and I am saving this as one of my faves... Lovelots, Tita Maia

lovely poem, my dear. whatever happens your father loves u most. God bless u

Sweet as the candies you miss Pure as the loneliness you endure Blessed as the feelings you´ve expressed God Bless You, Keithrynne Dragon Wizard

good poem...didn't you read this one Dad? 10

Here's my talented niece. Her longingness for a father is really reveals in every word of the poem. Keep it up! God Bless!

I miss those sweet candies Fruits and chocolates I miss playing with him Those screaming laughter we share wow so innocent feelings..sure when I was a child i was thinking same you are doing..well done dear and cute small girl of teenage.. really a good and impressive one and suggest for you to never stop writing as you are so good in writing poems in your 8 years age..liked your poem..let me give hundred percent marks...10/10

Child that loves most to her/his parents most, improves in life. You are welcome as poet. Your devotion at this tender age inevitable for father being away from headquarters. Good Piece.10+ for child writer as ensuing Inspiration for best pieces and poems.