a pure young heart forms
from a quick drop of water
metamorphosing
Clarity is all that matters and you have it poetess, nice job!
Touchingly expressed and amazingly shared. Beautiful Senryu.
Thank you, Mr. Brick. The images are juxtaposed, and various meanings derive from their symbols -for intentional free interpretation (Unfinished Poetry) . To me that drop of water though, was a real-life experience. Mihaela Pirjol
Four readers wrote comments on this poem but not one of them addressed the meaning! I have to admit I'm still left out of this poem - I don't understand the images - What is that drop of water? and What metamorphosis has taken place? I have too high a regard for your poetry, for everyone's poetry to pretend to understand when I don't. Besides with the poet herself just a click away, an explanation is so easy to get! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The depth at which these short lines strike at the heart cord is surprising indeed! VERY well done poetess.