The Syndrome Of The Empty Plate Poem by Rani Turton

The Syndrome Of The Empty Plate

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Throughout this wide world, a common foe.
The empty day, painful nights.
How many families have slept night after night
After dining face to face with an empty plate?

Children crying, helpless mothers
Waiting for destiny to become kinder
The fear, the abjection, the dream
Not to desire, not to die.
Body aching, bones that cannot move,
Tired out, cannot.

Lacklustre paths, wrong and right
Fades into indifference. Whenever differences arise
Between people from here or there,
Colours and customs, languages and arts
There is no differences between the syndrome
And the symptoms
And the fear and the pain that wait
Of the achingly empty plate.

Copyright: Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The metaphor of the empty plate is heart breaking and this poem evokes the desperation of unfortunate people in a cruel world. The last rhyming couplet really wraps up a skillfully written poem. 10 love Karin

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Patti Masterman 23 September 2009

I love the emphasis on how everyone is affected no matter their location or physical characteristics. Such a sad thing that it still exists to this day and probably always will. Great skill and restraint in here.

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