The Sweetness Of A Fire..... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The Sweetness Of A Fire.....

Rating: 5.0


Beneath the sparkling eyes
Quivering soft lips
Dancing hairs
Shiny teethes
Rolling tongue
Bubbling heart
My heart is trapped

The smoke above
Is flowing and visible
But my heart defies
Life is crawling
At snail's pace
Desires are burning high
I enjoy the sweetness
This fire is giving a try.

Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 15 December 2017

Wonderful description, and who said fire is not sweet...if not how come it can make things warmer..Asim, this is a sweet poem, get the heat but dont get burn haha..joking!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Sparkling eyes, shiny teeth and beautiful dancing hair give amazing perception. Flowing in visible emotion life crawls more with glowing love. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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Seema Chowdhury 24 November 2017

A tender write, Nicely expressed.

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