Extravagant source of light when it shines
Foolishly hoping what he touches all enshrines
Stones unmoved though warmly heated
Wax blocks have been melted!
Sun innocently said it's winter he dines.
A beautiful limerick............................................................
His light touching all to get enshrined, warming the unmoving stones, melting the wax blocks innocent sun is dining on winter....lovely work on nature...is winter bidding bye bye there...interesting poem Akhtar
Insightful presentation. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing.
Looks like a naughty poem about the sun..................
Beautifully written. The sun is the ultimate source of life. Through the mists n clouds, it finds a way to shine.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stones unmoved though warmly heated.. Though touched remains the same.. An insightful poem