The Sun Poem by sushma ambekar

The Sun

Rating: 4.8


I give you light
with all my might.
I wake you up
to hold your cup.

I watch the kangaroo happily leap
And the farmer's plants reap.
I see a hunter with his spear
Making an aim to kill a dear.

I see some children flying a kite
and some others ready for a fight
But on the other side, people rich and tall
are rushing into the grand city mall.
By now all the houses are lit with light
and the fields are red; it's a beautiful sight.
It's time for me to set,
I'll come back again, I bet! .

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehmet YILMAZLAR 21 October 2008

i like your rhmm nice to read

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premji premji 25 October 2008

beautiful rhyming sushma i love your words...thanks

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premji premji 25 October 2008

beautiful rhyming sushma i love your words...thanks

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premji premji 25 October 2008

beautiful rhyming sushma i love your words...thanks

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Sushma Gs 26 June 2014

Hi Sushma. Well written with fresh thoughts. Keep going :)

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premji premji 25 October 2008

beautiful rhyming sushma i love your words...thanks

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premji premji 25 October 2008

beautiful rhyming sushma i love your words...thanks

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premji premji 25 October 2008

beautiful rhyming sushma i love your words...thanks

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premji premji 25 October 2008

beautiful rhyming sushma i love your words...thanks

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