The Stranger World In Cyberspace Poem by Angelic(Annie) Female

The Stranger World In Cyberspace

Rating: 5.0


The day i flew into cyberspace
A swarm of bees set my screen ablaze
I walked my way through the wonderland
A content heart, no one could understand

I settled upon a rock alright
And began exploring the world so bright
Never had i wandered so deep before
That world i cherished all the more

The stranger world, the love of my life
Blinded me much more when i had no choice
The bees did sting me once or twice
Yet my heart made no way for an interstice

So deeply into pleasure and pain
Realized never i was just being insane
One day upon me lightening struck
Shattered to pieces, a heart full of muck

Saddened, at the thought of my plight
I then lifted my wings so featherlight
I made my way back to where i belong
These are the lyrics of an angels song

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 14 July 2009

good imaginative write...carefully formatted lines with sweet rhyming...thanks Annie...10

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Raj Nandy 05 June 2009

The poem is as lyrical and beautiful as your name! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

hey nice expressions indeed..The first line is very catchy...'The day i flew into cyberspace' hey didn't you found any meteorites in cyberspace? ...this is an interesting indeed.. nice..beautiful poem ..great poetic expressions..liked it best wishes with love shan

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Shweta Advani 03 May 2009

U rock buddy....keep up d gud work....: -)

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