The Death Of Betrayal Shall Surface Someday Poem by Angelic(Annie) Female

The Death Of Betrayal Shall Surface Someday

Rating: 5.0


You say you have nothing left to offer;
But you’ve given me a gift I greatly oblige;
The gift of betrayal, the gift to suffer;
The one you’ve conspired with expertise.

I’m beginning to remain often distressed;
My tears have washed my heart in blood;
Deception unbearable my soul has caressed;
Perhaps, I’ll dwell in forever’s teary flood.

You rejoice at the cost of my devastation;
Repeat your game in a whole new way;
How many more preys and excuses shall rain?
The death of betrayal shall surface someday!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Toni Bellanger 03 June 2009

I really enjoyed the style and the passion.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 June 2009

Yes, how long one can hide the tyrany and exploitation of relationships. A good poem with bitterness and passions the main ingrediants. Keep writing, Annie. Its good for your catharsis. Best Wishes Naseer

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The death of betrayal shall surface someday! it will not allow u peace.. beautiful write i appriciate it......10

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2009

good poem Annie...the lines there very effectively speak about the present bitterness and despair in the relation that was once sweet...eloquent write...10

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Lady Grace 04 June 2009

this poem is expressive..nicely written..words are well chosen.grace

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anurag duggal 04 June 2009

betryal deceprion the real world....yeah its painful and yes we allresort to it all the time dont we

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anurag duggal 04 June 2009

betryal deceprion the real world....yeah its painful and yes we allresort to it all the time dont we

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