The Sorrounding Empty Poem by allan macli borges

The Sorrounding Empty

Rating: 4.9


Voices comes from
Nowhere
Outgoing to
Right there

Around me a world of doubts
An empty shell is my body
Disturbed in my thoughts
Darkness falls surround

Words comes from
Somewhere
Going into
Right here

Voices from inside of me
The path begins to turn clear
Now I’m ready to hear
I must follow it to be free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 16 September 2008

Another very good composition. Enjoyed it. Love the hope at the end.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2009

good phrasology! fine thoughtful poem! well done! 10+

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 December 2008

Listening to inner voices leads to knowledge or JNANA and then to atonement, MOKSHA in Sanscrit.....right sign

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 October 2008

A nice composition, Love it with 10.

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I give you 9. Keep composing your verses for such ideas, that send the message of Hope, in a world of dispute, destruction, emptiness, doubt. Only we, the poets, can bring the Hope in this misery.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 16 September 2008

Lovely poem- great writing :)

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