The Dreams Poem by allan macli borges

The Dreams

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Never the dreams become true
As we await for miracles from above
Where nothing's living to give us hope
Never the dreams become true
As we keep the eyes closed indoor
As we keep our knees on the floor

So much weighty is this bale to carrying alone
Are we going to see that we're already at home?
The seeds we've sowed by the way of time
They shall bring back all we left behind

Never the dreams become true
As we keep looking for smoke
As we take the blame of elders
As we pay for the crimes of others
Never the dreams become true
As we hide what really matters

It's not enough for us the crises and disasters
It's not enough to help us to see the right path
There's so much more around than light and darkness
There's so much more to do than showing we regret

Never the dreams become true
- Just never
As we keep putting the guilt on ghosts
As we keep following the way of the most
When we gather the required bold
When we set the wounds unfolded
Stretching out all our fears and hopes

Maybe the dreams become true
As we start writing a new piece
Where there's no place for ghosts and mists
Where the life is respected as it is
Then some dreams will come true
As we start wiping the tears
As we keep our head out of gloom

Thursday, June 11, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Winnie Angel 12 June 2009

a poem abt dreams and the aspirations ans shades of grey that come with it..beautiful its a lovely piece...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 June 2009

Its not a dream where some parts of the world were living like Hell came to them for a reason that only they know.Its a dream world when everyone has their dream comes true.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 June 2009

It is really an excellent poem on dream. Dream never, but sometimes became true. I love the way you have concluded with happy message.10+++

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Catrina Heart 13 June 2009

Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom ------- rhymes were fine together with the diction... and vividness of the poem was great...10+++

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Obinna Eruchie 13 June 2009

may the dreams of boons become true through hope, belief and determination. glad to hear such a message.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 June 2009

Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom Some dreams realize some do'nt but we must keep dreaming for dreams are life. A beautiful and thought provoking poem, Allan. A dreamful 10. Best Wishes Naseer

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a beautiful poem shows the awareness of the poet about the causes of the failure the causes of any failure ended with a hopeful writing...well done..10+++ Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 15 June 2009

Initial images and catharsis are very powerful. But I am more impressed in realizing dreams in the form of poetry. Wow!

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Beautiful poem where you have put so much thought into your lovely images. It also flows so well and I believe in some miracles, but we do create much of own reality. Just dreaming is not being positive, but writing and helping others and working together, can bring with it positive energy. Great work Allan! 10 Karin Anderson

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rago rago 14 June 2009

a fantastuc write of the dreams...... when sometimes they come true we are gifted........ see my 10 ++

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