The Song From The Heart Poem by Bijay Kant Dubey

The Song From The Heart

Rating: 4.6


In a very sweet and sonorous voice, sing you, say you,
Said she the girl in a golden and nasal sound of her own,

Do you love me? Do you love me?
The voice coming from the heart and its deep within
Yes, I love you, I love you,
Came the answer reverberating from the other side.

Again,
Sing it again, ladies and gentlemen, said the announcer,
Do you love me? Do you love me?
Yes, I love you, I love you.

Do you love me? Yes, I love you.
Do you love me? Yes, I love you,
The beloved went on asking in a very singsong voice of her own
And the coampanion too went on saying lyrically.

O, it was a nice combination to see the hearts meeting,
Feeling good to see them united! ,
Came the comment from the elderly audience.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Princess Lilypad 01 September 2013

Just fantastic. I adore this poem with its callings. Lilting and angelic but direct regarding the sad resounding and repeated doubt. Love the match made for this wondering woman. Happy end with a match to cancel out potential despair and lack of validation. We all need it. Lovely just lovely. I invite you to read my writing nymph, the characters do very much parallel one another.

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Princess Lilypad 01 September 2013

Just fantastic. I adore this poem with its callings. Lilting and angelic but direct regarding the sad resounding and repeated doubt. Love the match made for this wondering woman. Happy end with a match to cancel out potential despair and lack of validation. We all need it. Lovely just lovely. I invite you to read my writing nymph, the characters do very much parallel one another.well done.

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Princess Lilypad 01 September 2013

Just fantastic. I adore this poem with its callings. Lilting and angelic but direct regarding the sad resounding and repeated doubt. Love the match made for this wondering woman. Happy end with a match to cancel out potential despair and lack of validation. We all need it. Lovely just lovely. I invite you to read my writing nymph, the characters do very much parallel one another.well done.

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Princess Lilypad 01 September 2013

I favorited this in my poems. Thank you for creating it.

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Rajnish Manga 16 November 2014

Several lines of this poem have been lifted from your own poem Love Me, Love Me, You Just Love Me. 'Do you love me? ' is the poet's repeated refrain but towards the end you lalk about the meeting of hearts. You could have treated the subject with a greater sense of maturity.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 August 2018

O, it was a nice combination to see the hearts meeting, Feeling good to see them united! , Came the comment from the elderly audience. love, relationship. living always n love is always a gift of God. we humans alone with our power cannot do it always. thank u. tony

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Jaya Agarwal 08 February 2018

well writing: heart song is beautifully reflected in this poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2017

The song which flows from heart becomes attractive and touching and adorable.This poem is one of them which justifies its title. Dear Dr. Dubey, you have astutely presented this poem. I quote... Do you love me? Do you love me? The voice coming from the heart and its deep within Yes, I love you, I love you, Came the answer reverberating from the other side. Thanks for sharing.

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Very short, but fantastic.

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A creative composition from the heart.

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