The Smell Of Rain Poem by Carlie Piper

The Smell Of Rain



I felt the moist air
Kiss my cheek
As all of my limbs
Grew so very weak

Looking around
Watching flowers die
In the meadow
Where I lie

My lips turn blue
My eyes go cold
And suddenly
The clouds look like gold

My vision blurs
It's over soon
My fingertips finally
Can touch the moon

But the light shines
And one day more
I will fight
This terrible war

Saturday, February 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,fight,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 25 February 2017

Nice poem. You did a good job with your first poem posted on this site. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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