The Slow Walk Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

The Slow Walk

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She walked the flatlands
with the sincerity of a dullard
when her thoughts crumbled..

causing memory pain,
solidifying errors
of judgement and fault,
the weight of consience
and a heavy heart...

but she smiled,
a superficial smile,
and carried on
walking the last mile home.

Saturday, August 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sorrow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andy C 21 July 2015

Your poem is well done, and meaningfull. It shows her angst but it makes me want to know why.

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Sally P. P. 12 February 2020

Thanks for your comment, Andy.Much appreciated.

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James Roberts 10 October 2014

I really liked this poem it reminded me of the fact that sometimes when I'm just walking down the road always on my own some embarrassing momment flashes to mind and I think what did I do that for

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Sally P. P. 12 February 2020

Nice to hear from you, James. Thanks for comment.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 August 2014

A poem expresing poignance. Kudos for the way u hav pennd it. Nice to read u again sally.

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Sally P. P. 17 June 2020

Nice to hear from you. Always appreciated.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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