Sally Plumb Plumb

Freshman - 714 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Infinity - Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

When I missed you
on a fateful day,
and my mental sustenance
was drained with misery,
I cursed the late fall sun
and cried - let darkness come.

Spin rotund flare
until you are a cinder
and winter befalls
the universe
with colder stars
and older lights,
then night will reign
for eternity across
forevers sights.

- and me an ancient lady
in timelessness unfree
will wander the spatial deserts
into infinity.

Comments about Infinity by Sally Plumb Plumb

  • Gold Star - 5,607 Points Madathil Rajendran Nair (2/19/2015 10:30:00 PM)

    Beautifully woven mystic words. Lovely poem. (10) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/19/2015 9:47:00 PM)

    and me an ancient lady
    in timelessness unfree
    will wander the spatial deserts
    into infinity. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,852 Points Godfrey Morris (2/19/2015 4:13:00 PM)

    An awesome poem. Like the imagery protrayed (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,852 Points Godfrey Morris (2/19/2015 4:11:00 PM)

    An awesome poem. Like the imagery protested (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,781 Points Brian Stafford (2/19/2015 9:39:00 AM)

    very good, you got it plumb right! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,821 Points Kim Barney (2/19/2015 8:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, needing only a comma after the word SPIN on line seven and an apostrophe in the word FOREVER'S in line fifteen.
    Well done, and congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,970 Points John Richter (2/19/2015 7:18:00 AM)

    A very well crafted poem with deep insights on a great loss.... Quite lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,304 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (2/19/2015 5:19:00 AM)

    In sadness, when one wants to isolate oneself, every thing including light is a curse. Naturally one needs sun to go down quickly. A touching poem, indeed. Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 304 Points Joseph Anderson (9/21/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    Deep and serious with moving thoughts. You do dig deep (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 728 Points Shahzia Batool (8/30/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    sadness prevails inside with a touch of timelessness! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,578 Points Ken E Hall (5/29/2013 6:55:00 PM)

    Sadness expressed so beautifully in a situation we must all face seeing as you write colder stars and older lights, there is one bright light for we will all meet again, for I have booked a seat on the front row near the choir!
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,391 Points Hazel Durham (5/29/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    So beautiful, with amazing lines, superb poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,696 Points Dave Walker (5/28/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem, really liked it, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (5/16/2013 11:22:00 AM)

    A very mystical poem Sally with well crafted words. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (5/8/2013 5:14:00 AM)

    Brilliant Sally, especially like the middle verse - very imaginative and inspired write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,571 Points Paul Brookes (5/8/2013 4:30:00 AM)

    Very lyric poem an infinity of thoughts. Thanks for sharing BB: O) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 8, 2013

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