The Same Equation Poem by Ravi Panamanna

The Same Equation

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At night
When she unveils her body,
A fragrance fills the air,
He is into the coolest springs.

In a few moments
He is back from the torrents.
The whispering wind is still alive,
The fragrance hasn’t left the vales.

From these singing dales
He thinks of those fire-flies!
They are born in moments
And soon to perish- what do they taste?

Childhood? Youth?
Sex and love?
A timeless age, the feel of rainbow,
And the whispering cascades of life?

Be it anyway,
They too yearn the springs of life.
As the moments crop their wings,
They too crawl for air and scent.

This is an endless quest,
This is the timeless zest.
Every breath is an urge to live,
Every beat is a hope for a dawn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 23 May 2009

A very well articulated poem with zest for life. CP

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Indira Babbellapati 23 May 2009

o, yes...same equation for all breathing beings!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 May 2009

Yes! This life is an endless urge. Very beautiful indeed.

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Chitra - 23 May 2009

all the variables of 'the' equation well said..

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 May 2009

The primordial urge of the God to be that has created this beautiful universe................A Good Write..........

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Barry A. Lanier 27 May 2009

a creative and evocative portrayal sensous appealing to the olfactory as well as the visions and movement

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Surya . 25 May 2009

indeed it is different and lovely poem. you have captured the conqurers feel /emotion aptly.lovely and moving.posted 10 surya

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Catrina Heart 24 May 2009

beautiful poetry written................10

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 May 2009

'The Same Equation....' Is that why you've posted the same poem TWICE? ? Even Einstein would love this equation of yours...This one might even overshadow his... Cheers. Subroto

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Reshma Ramesh 24 May 2009

...............well penned! !

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Ravi Panamanna

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Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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