The Ripping Skies Poem by Soren Valentine

The Ripping Skies



We often gaze at the heavens above,
hoping, hoping that they're falling in love,
When the Ripper his illusions doth weave,
for in reality our heavens do cleave.

I remember when once there was one sky,
under which nobody would truly die,
as darkness forever ceased to exist,
when our tears we could truly resist.

Thence the Ripper came to end all joy,
ethereally making us his toy,
and with the fire of the 'star'
did he form my mighty scar.

And so his sin cometh still,
slithering, weaving for the sky to fill,
enthralled, at the ripping of the skies to stare,
ever deeper into the Ripper's evil glare.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alla Simone 17 December 2012

The beginning sucks you in- captivating. And the storytelling throughout with vivid details keeps you hooked until the end. Nice work.

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