The Real Freedom Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

The Real Freedom

Rating: 4.3


A stable foundation is needed
For a structure to last for years
For happy relationship, we need to spend
The real physical, moral presence
We started to live in virtual world
Counting just the likes delusionally
Too much of indulge in anything
Could damage brain and break our abilities
Turnoff the digital world, set an example
For the children.... think about digital detox
The real freedom for the imprisoned souls

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Free yourself, feel the self
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 18 August 2016

Yeah, this type of freedom can only give us peace and a beautiful life.

0 0 Reply

thanks for the comment, of-course we too are entangled in it! welcome dear poet

0 0
Kelly Kurt 17 August 2016

We all require this kind of freedom, and should actively seek it.

1 0 Reply

Hope so, if so really we are blessed, thanks dear poet

0 0
Edward Kofi Louis 14 August 2016

To last for years! Thanks for sharing.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success