The Rain Is Like A Man Poem by RIC BASTASA

The Rain Is Like A Man

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the rain this early morning
has an accompanying wind

i look at them by the window
my inner world divided by a thick glass

the trees are swaying and some leaves
begin to fall like some kind of a dance

the rain like a man carries the wind
on his arms and the wind leans down

i catch a glimpse of how they passionately kiss
it is sad and lonely and then the rain stops

the morning sun comes and the leaves
are at the feet of the trees kind of wet with tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 24 September 2009

you leave a vision with your words 10

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Patti Masterman 24 September 2009

I like this one very much.

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Joseph Poewhit 24 September 2009

A man does alter things around himself.

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