The Question Mark Poem by Jilted BUTTERFLY

The Question Mark

Rating: 4.3


a sound like ice cracking
loud and echoing up the hill
made the workers stop and look up
birds flew into the sky in fright
and children stopped their merry noise.
that sound was the question mark
striking against my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gargee Kanhere 05 August 2008

written with very deep innocent feelings.... its really touching.... and yes, questions really do create such effects.... :)

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Ivor Hogg 04 August 2008

questions rarely produce the answers we want, more often only more questionsYou have a clear style of delivery

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Existential Despair 03 August 2008

The simplicity makes this a unique beauty...nice

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Fred Babbin 03 August 2008

This one is pretty open-ended, but not bad.

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