The Puppet Poem by Logan Glover

The Puppet

Rating: 5.0


fatal strings are holding me
there actions dictate my ever move
holding all the keys
my heart is wide open to be improved

without them i would simply fall upon the ground
why must these strings be cut
i am unable to walk around
stuck in a rut

am i the one cutting these strings
to many that what it seems
like a knife the feeling stings
it is me who takes it to the extreme

so please just stay here
so i can live without fear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Z. 29 June 2007

Wow, I love this! Great metaphor, great message-it's fabulous! I love it, love it, love it! ! ! ! ! Marvelous job!

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Evaughn Gray 28 June 2007

aww that is so sweet...and pretty dark... it's really great your friend ~hazel

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