Moving Along Poem by Logan Glover
Moving Along
life is dark
life is bright
aggressions sparks
unsupecting delights
all moving on
working told a better day
fixing flaws that are called upon
as we slowly fade away
is there such a point
for why i am here
so much disappoints
but we still care
we still on moving along
not knowing if were wrong
Wow. I really like this..... I mean, it's all the doubt I've ever felt about life said so much more beautifully than I could! ! ! ! ! I love it!
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5/3/2024 11:13:36 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Your poem shows the angst of the situation well. one thing though. eecummings may have broken the capitalization rules and a few punctuation rules, but he did so in a way that was clear to the reader. We're or missing word..... were. all in all nicely done otherwises.