The Profundity Of Pain Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Profundity Of Pain

Rating: 5.0


To have found
And lost you!
Life went by
In vain,
Nothing but
An uncomfortable
Cover,
Where sadness
And tears,
Could not hide
The empty river,
Dry, Wide
Without you,
Total pain.

Thursday, July 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 19 July 2020

I can totally relate to this poem. Very well written, Sandra!

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Bill Cantrell 17 July 2020

A lost love is a lost life, the emptiness it leaves behind is a void that consumes the smell of roses, it devours the sweetness joy, it is a shadow constantly jumping in front of us telling us that we left something behind....I totally understand this poem and you do the point justice! Great poem Sandra!

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Kostas Lagos 17 July 2020

Sandra, another enchanting poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 July 2020

The pain of losing the love os well expressed in this impressive piece...10++❤️❤️❤️

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