The Never Opening Door Poem by Brooke Moran

The Never Opening Door

Rating: 5.0


You have so many secrets locked away
Its not so safe to be that way
They were never open
And now its over
All because you did something
That a friend shouldnt do
You revealed your hidden truth
Now I see whom what you are
Its scary and painful
But I kicked you of my heart
I'm debarring you to come back to me
It is so forbidden
You must not see.

After all these years this how you treat me.
Ive been nothing but be a good friend
And now because of your bitterness
Im saying its the end.
The end of us
The end of you and I
The end of our friendship
and your painful lies


Its over its over
Its done for good
But I couldnt be more happier
Cause you are out for good.
No bitterness
No more lies
No more pretending
and back stabbing.
Yes you did.

How could you treat me like that?
I never understood.
I heard you thought it would be funny.
You thought it would be funny to watch your friend cry?
To cry with pain because of your nasty lies?


Well look what you've done.
Its all your fault.
Say Sorry all you want
But you're not coming back.



Your sorry is nothing.
It has no meaning.

Its like...
I am a door with a password.
And you say a word to enter.
It means nothing cause its not working.
The door does not open for you.
Because the password you use
and say to the door...the door does not comprehend.


So say sorry all you want.
The door isnt opening.
And you're never coming in.

Thats how low you appear to be.
I never thought you would be like this to me.

I am moving on...
Say bye bye.
Thats how I roll.
I roll without you by my side.


Rolling rolling up and down
back and forth
and all around.



Yep thats how I roll till the end of time.

Starting a new future...


and leaving you behind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Woods 14 August 2008

This poem is amazing! I love it! it expresses so much in just one verse it's lovely :)

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Anong All 13 August 2008

i like this pome of yours, its very expressive, and you've used what's called a broken recorded effect, to enforce your feelings towards the other. but i must say when things like this happen, its not always best to hold anykind of hate for the other individual, cause it will only cause you heartache too in a way, better to end it wisely or on good terms so that door doesn't freeze things in the future...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 August 2008

heart when hurtful by the reeks of sorrow love when betrayed by the pretension eyes yet gleans by the tears mind seems to flinch by the ire.............yet painful and poignant, eloquence of love unsmilingly rocked up by the remorse, ingeniously true, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 August 2008

your frustation shown in each line...........hope she'll comeback to you.nice piece.

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