veeraiyah subbulakshmi


The Morning Sun Ridicules.. - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

The morning sun ridicules,
Showing all its toned muscles,
strips away the slimy sad moss,
spews of hope rays to all phases,
The happiness on its shiny face,
The emergence with no mace,
The sincerity for its profession,
The concerned in its actions,
The vibrancy in the deliverance,
Partially impartial in distribution,
Life giving treasure in its possession,
Humility and generosity are friends,
The morning sun emerges from the distance.


Comments about The Morning Sun Ridicules.. by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Veteran Poet - 1,321 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (9/12/2013 10:12:00 PM)

    Nice poem about the morning sun. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,541 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/12/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    Partially impartial in distribution
    Even sun is not impartial. Not many can see some truths. Beautifully said. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/10/2013 8:00:00 PM)

    Good morning sun to you.
    only riducules dwellers of the dark
    they have substance and shadow
    when in fact they remain stark
    Light turns back the moss of time
    grows the trees of limes
    with sugar is so very fine (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013


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