The Moon Poem by hamid kareem

The Moon

Rating: 5.0


when i was young
i'd sit for hours
watchng the moon
more in awe and
out of curiusity i gazed
day by day and night by night
like its heavenly beauty
and its ray of light
its secrets non the less seem undivulged
although many a man
have seen its surface
none alive have found its secrets
but now am older
and under it i forget my bother
as i cant help but appreciate
its ethereal beauty
and the handiwork of the creator

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
casey osman 26 March 2008

This is what life's about, nice work.

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Vaibhav Shah 26 March 2008

we can only appreciate the beauty of moon without finding any secret of its origin and its nature.nicely written

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Michael Smith 26 March 2008

honestly the moon is the most beautiful sight i had ever laid my eyes on...so i can relate

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Thad Wilk 28 March 2008

Lovely write Hamid, the moon is a wonder to be appreciated from the creator! ! *10*! ! Thank you for sharing! ! Friend Thad

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Rani Turton 28 March 2008

The moon has always been the focus of dreams, especially poets'. Moon, mystery, imagination. Good poem, Hamid.

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Linda Moore 16 January 2009

Very Fine, mysterious the Moon, its changes, the pull on Earth, beauty in it all.......10

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The Moon is very fascinating and there are many stories told about her in legend and lore.It also plays an important role in Astrology.Lovely poem about something everyone can enjoy in the night sky.

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Sabrina Jubahar 16 April 2008

beautiful.. you amaze me, you really do!

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Your poem is as beautiful as the moon itself. As long as man looks and appreciates the handiworks of the creator, it would be nice. In the guise of exploration, if he meddles with nature, the effects would not be palatable.

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Chantal Lammerts 29 March 2008

love the moon myself, very nice written. all your poem are written very good, nice themes to... very realistic themes, that's so good about it, everyone can relate to them. your a great poet, keep it up!

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