The Moody Rain Goddess In Poor Man's Sky Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Moody Rain Goddess In Poor Man's Sky

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It's a dark feast and stars were hidden purposely
And the Moon on vacation it seems.
The Goddess comes out through the dark clouds,
Just a small drizzle to their innocent hopes.
The poor girl is ready to go out from the ghetto with an unknown bridegroom,
A shooting star has fallen down to their journey as a chief guest.
'A good omen my dear and make a hundred thousand offspring for the next census to get temper with the blunt life.'
The bride's close relative an old Blacksmith said.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 11 May 2009

Great atmosphere in this one. It adds to the enigmatic fascination of your poem. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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