Hazel Durham


The Maker Of The World - Poem by Hazel Durham

I see the bluest ocean in my dreams with candy floss clouds
Floating by,
With angels flying, just stopping to bow
To The Maker Of The World, as he strides out with a dignified command,
Of surveying his families across avery land,
He reaches out his large, strong hand,
To hold my heartbeat of my own internal band,
Of romantic songs to embrace, as I demand,
The certainty of happiness, wealth and health,
Like cards that must be dealt,
The Maker Of The World smiles at me,
Making my selfishness melt,
'My child all you need is to love,
Look how the angels watch over you,
Inside your heartbeat is a sign to step into the day,
Without hate, fear, jealousy and vanity, just give a cheer!
As life trembles like a raindrop on a leaf,
Falling to the warm earth,
Belief in The Maker Of The World,
Will always give you a soft landing,
On ground that rises to the wide expanse of outer space,
Live without wanting,
Live without lies,
The truth is written across the heavens,
As birds fly with the light of serenity,
Across the everchanging skies! '


Comments about The Maker Of The World by Hazel Durham

  • Gold Star - 31,288 Points Akhtar Jawad (3/19/2015 5:25:00 AM)

    'My child all you need is to love,
    Look how the angels watch over you,
    Inside your heartbeat is a sign to step into the day,
    Without hate, fear, jealousy and vanity, just give a cheer!
    Amazing lines of a wonderful poem that mesmerizes the hearts and souls..................10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Mr. Nobody (3/28/2014 9:41:00 AM)

    I am rolling of the floor laughing! ! ! I know where you are from. Candy Floss! A wonderful
    word we learning last Summer!

    BTW, nice write (you are pretty too!) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thomas Carolan (3/3/2014 3:00:00 PM)

    maker of the world how true a poem your writing comes from the heart live without wanting live without lies (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Tanya Gupta (2/27/2014 5:00:00 AM)

    what a poem, 'THE MAKER OF THE WORLD'. your poetries always inspires me to write better.your every thing in the poetries are right from the selection of words to the feel of poetry..well written and always be writing to inspire the poets like me. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,698 Points Anthony Di''anno (2/26/2014 12:19:00 PM)

    Yet another beautifully written poem Hazel. As Lyn so rightly says your heart is poured into all you write. A gift indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (2/22/2014 11:31:00 PM)

    If a poet were there in BC 12,000 and if there were these PH members like all of us, what would be there to thank this maker of the world, I am just wondering.
    Billions of years of burning and cooling processes and millions of years of fauna and flora emerging and re-emerging after perishing for a long spell were all the phases of this world.
    The beauty [if at all it exists in any form] in this planet is a poet`s solace and an optimist`s oasis of notions often contradicted.
    A million years from now this poem will remain as a beautiful piece of a poet`s imaginative flutter and the surviving organisms will not be able to be envious of its writer.
    Hazel, I am envious of you for reasons unknown and feelings purely enthralling our gregarious platform. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 357 Points Charles Jagongo Ogola (2/21/2014 9:18:00 AM)

    This is beautifully written, I like this poem
    'The Maker Of The World smiles at me,
    Making my selfishness melt, '... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,561 Points Lyn Paul (2/18/2014 3:57:00 PM)

    Beautifully written Hazel I always feel your heart in your words. This I love. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,364 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/8/2014 9:58:00 AM)

    The truth is written across the heavens,
    As birds fly with the light of serenity,
    Across the ever changing skies!

    Brilliant lines. What God desire of us is honesty. Honesty of thoughts, beliefs and action. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/6/2014 7:08:00 AM)

    Very Beautiful lines.....
    Life trembles like a raindrop on a leaf,
    Falling to the warm earth,
    Belief in The Maker Of The World,
    Will always give you a soft landing,
    Live without lies
    The truth is written across the heavens, Very true said in each lines....
    I loved reading all the lines....This poem give a pleasant feeling to read. Thanks for this wonderful poem. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,697 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 10:17:00 PM)

    An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty.
    Thank you so much for sharing and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,697 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 10:16:00 PM)

    An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty.
    Thank you so much for sharing and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,697 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 10:11:00 PM)

    An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty.
    Thank you so much for sharing and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,697 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty.
    Thank you so much for sharing and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,697 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 10:06:00 PM)

    An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty.
    Thank you so much for sharing and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,697 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 10:05:00 PM)

    An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty.
    Thank you so much for sharing and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,697 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2014 10:05:00 PM)

    An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty.
    Thank you so much for sharing and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,698 Points Anthony Di''anno (1/26/2014 4:04:00 AM)

    'my child all you need is to love' were all children taught how to do this from birth maybe it wouldn't take more than a generation to turn the world around. Good poem, enjoyed it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (1/19/2014 12:22:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem, full of inspiration ..enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,160 Points Is It Poetry (1/17/2014 2:26:00 PM)

    Look at life, look at love,
    to the each, to them the all.
    One special of,
    of the one whom is special.
    Looking down,
    instead you look up at the clouds... iip (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 16, 2014


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