The Loveliest Rose Poem by Kuldeep Bansiwal

The Loveliest Rose

Rating: 4.4


One morning in the bloomy days,
Among the glaring golden rays,
I passed through a field,
So strange yet heavenly wild,
Replete with beauty as Flora's child,
glowing were hundreds of colours though,
My heart but for a rosiest rose was pining,
Who, alone in a thorny bush shining.
Guarded by the unkind troops,
In its demonic abode,
I, like an impatient lover,
To have the beauty it bore,
Rushed to quench the lovelorn thirst,
And intruded in there first,
Hellish pain i felt of devilish spikes,
My mind cried, and heart smiled,
Though the pain was wild, but enough mild
after ages of bloody sweaty toil,
Getting it seemed quite foil,
I being so defeated,
had to forsook my desire,
And return home with tranquil fire,
Thus, my dear friend,
The loveliest rose in the flowery land,
Left me aching heart and a gory hand.

Saturday, May 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: unrequited love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 February 2018

Work of an active imagination embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation Kuldeep. Thanks for sharing and remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Kuldeep. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 06 May 2017

Amazing narrative giving vent to the hurt and anguish of a lover whose love remained unrequited. A deeply emotional outburst. Something very unique. Thanks for sharing. My heart but for a rosiest rose was pining, Hellish pain.... My mind cried.... Though the pain was wild, but enough mild The loveliest rose in the flowery land, Left me aching heart and a gory hand.

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Kuldeep Bansiwal 26 May 2017

thank you sir!

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