The Loveliest Poem I Ever Wrote Poem by Putholi Arumugham T

The Loveliest Poem I Ever Wrote

Rating: 4.9


The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was with almost a dozen couplets
my fingers sang, when they met yours -
the glimmer in your eyes said it all.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the quadrets born when my lips
and yours gently interwove -
the shiver in your hands shown it small.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the sonnets my body composed
every time it stroked yours in rhythm -
the murmer in your lips claimed it tall.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the haiku my heart pronounced
when I showered love deep within you -
the tremor in your body praised it well.

The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was the hymn born from silence
when my soul mixed with yours -
the flower in your womb is my nobel.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Phan 28 March 2009

awww i luv it its was amazing well done 9+

0 0 Reply
Linda Ori 28 March 2009

A tender and loving poem, filled with wonderful sentiments. A few small typos, otherwise nicely written. Linda

0 0 Reply

Ah! a tribute to the forms.. brilliant

0 0 Reply
Demi Buxton 01 April 2009

i think that your poems are very gracefull and down to heart and in away they are all link together sort of but i think they are good and keep writing

0 0 Reply
Jyoti Joseph 01 April 2009

a lovely poem...it forced me to just look into my heart and feel the way you expressed...awesome...i will give 10+ for this thanks

0 0 Reply
Aparna Sinha 13 July 2009

ha ha...this is poetry! ! it has rhyme, a rhythm, beauty and wisdom.... great! ! perfect 10

0 0 Reply
Gina Layog 22 April 2009

your poetry, truly sensual, the touch of love, the bloom of romance, words that reveal, the soul of the lover, to his beloved....

0 0 Reply
Wildan F Rabbani 14 April 2009

Lovely poem, but you still can write more lovely poems keep writing..

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 13 April 2009

a great introspection..substantial of a poet creativeness of verses..well penned...

0 0 Reply
Charlotte Andreski 11 April 2009

Very sensual and romantic, but open and true. Amazing phrasing, great use of the elements.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success