A Day In My Wife's Life Poem by Putholi Arumugham T

im srry its was gd nothing to fix just take my advice n write wht u want from ur heart i give u 9+

Yes. This was written with much depth and sorrow. Quite impressively I might add. There are a lot of writers who try to write this well, but don't. I was much impressed by the clarity of meaning and brevity of this piece. Please continue writing and expressing thoughts in this very concise way. GW62

I have to Agree with Wolfeman. this is very good writing.

you are good! short, simple, sad but you let the readers cling for more.That's poetry for me.This is well penned.Thanks for the invite. Hugs, meggie

a very significant write...and well versed on poetic creativity....nice but something just to say how the title constructed...it shoud be A DAY IN MY WIFE'S LIFE - the apostrophe in S to make a singular if you want the plural meaning - (a lot of women) -should be WIVES

does she disapprove of your poems consuming of your time?

It's well written. really like the way you worded everything. ;)

a well written ode to a day in your wifes life, a unexpected sad twist at the ending

this poem is expressive.altough sadness appears in ending..grace

Nice powerful what can I do to help?