The Light With In A Person Poem by Boris Barron

The Light With In A Person

Rating: 3.8


A light within in a person
Is the kindest part of all
it is to prove to other people what this person is made of
it could be bad it could it be evil
it could be good it could be nice
but what I always really wonder is that its hidden really tight
if we all know that it existes
why can we not find it
is that because that we hide it cleaver
or wheir looking really far
I believe the reson is that we all have something evil
being hidden from the rest
it could be a joke a prank but we've all been there
why would we look for it if we know where it is
because we all are to afraid to tell out loud
so its a never ending secret
you know yours I know mine theres nuthing to change
but remmember if you tell it to your sister
I bet she has something twice as bad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
dark angel 05 November 2008

i like your poem. you think outside the box

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Ershad Mazumder 05 November 2008

Excellant theme and idea but not poetic. You have talent to grow as a poet. Always keep in your mind and soul that prose is not poem. A poem is composed from soul. But a prose is composed to inform. A poem is always shrouded. Theme of a poem is always hidden.

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*Trusting You* 04 November 2008

this is very very good! my fav of yours! your ending is very true. Becca

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