The Light In The Night Poem by Aubrey Silver

The Light In The Night

Rating: 5.0


do you see that there? do you see that light?

in the darkness there is always a light just like if you have suicidal tendinchies there is always some one there for you

there is alway a light in the night no matter how far astray you are
just know that people will help you no matter wat you just have to ask
and so i ask you do you see that light?

i have and i follow that light around every corner of the would of night...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Awsome job Aubrey cb

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 February 2009

This is a most powerful message. Though I would check the last line again if I were you. I like the way you went directly to your message. No wasted words. Excellant presentation. GW62

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Darkness J 05 February 2009

I like it. An optimistic vision. Keep it.

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