The Letter Unread! Poem by Geoff Warden

The Letter Unread!

Rating: 5.0


Unto mine heart is hidden
The letter never written
Never given onto voice
Nor upon paper released
Unto mine heart the touch
That your fingertips swept
Leaving feelings of unwant
An' thoughts of disbelief
Unto mine heart fair Lady
The twist of your turns
An' an ever need of sun
Of which suppy was forward.....

So direction now must move....
an' this Love must now find home....................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 23 January 2007

Agree with Frankie here, I like this usage of the couplet at the end. Sometimes they tell more in so few words. 'Tis a fine ending for sure.... HG: -) xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2007

Solid work...last 2 lines ? ....Slam Dunk! FJR

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Geoff Warden

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London Ontario Canada
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