A Frozen Door! Poem by Geoff Warden

A Frozen Door!

Rating: 5.0


My Heart
a frozen door
closed by the hands of greed

A moment
one has chose
to shackle and chain down

My Heart
an open door
by one I have never met

space/time
will never change
the miracle she performed........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 September 2006

Sir Geoff...succinctly impassioned '''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Patricia Gale 01 September 2006

Deicing for loves grander. A splendid piece!

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Sylvia Spencer 05 September 2006

Geoff such a great poem an awsome piece of writing.cheers Sylvie

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Ruby Root 06 September 2006

Hi Geoff, It sounds like either someone really hurt you, and you closed your heart. I don't know if I am right. Take care Excellent poem.

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Charles M Moore 11 September 2006

Nice write, Like the space time continuum from beginning to end.

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Daffodil Decarie 22 October 2007

I'm envious, this is one of the poems I've read here in poemhunter that I'll say worth a phrase such as; 'A poem well written, thanks for sharing' and leaving all the objective criticism of its poetic devices valid use. lol. Truly simple, sound, smooth idea wraps around the entire text, the whole play of words. Keep it up! Daffodil

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Tranquil Ocean 10 June 2007

My Heart An Open Door For just You and Me Lovely Geoff.Where are you, my friend? Love...TO

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 05 April 2007

I love the simplicity of this piece of poetry. Also the title made me want to read it and see what it was about 'A frozen door! ' Great work and very much a poem that has much meaning and great imagery! Keep up the good work. Shelley

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Sandra Fowler 20 January 2007

What an excellent title! You are a fine wordsmith. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Melvina Germain 02 January 2007

I have my own take on this one, I'm not 100% sure if I'm right, but of course it's what it means to me the reader isn't it. A truly beautiful piece of writing, I enjoyed the read and will probably come back and read it again and again. Fabulous. Melvina

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Geoff Warden

Geoff Warden

London Ontario Canada
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