The Leaving Poem by Karen Corinne Herceg

The Leaving

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It's not the leaving,
it's the getting out,
mommy whispered
through glazed eyes
rheumy with loss.
The unavoidable last breath,
the chest heaving,
a final rise against time
that will soon cease in one body.
The hiss of oxygen,
a tank of lungs,
machines replacing body parts
that have surrendered
long before spirit.
It all murmurs on.
It's the price for becoming timeless,
to enter a forever place
that we tricked ourselves
into thinking a body might be.

Saturday, July 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edmund Strolis 24 July 2016

Mortality is the great motivator. A final rise against time. Perhaps our own self-tricking is within us, a survival mechanism against futility.

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Karen Corinne Herceg

Karen Corinne Herceg

New York City, NY, USA
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