The Hidden Doors Poem by Sana Ashher

The Hidden Doors

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I had a dream today
A weird and extraordinary one
the dream reflected me completely
It opened doors i had never seen or heard
i entered one and found myself in pieces
taut to a thorny bush i appeared to be in misery
i shut that door it was too much to bear
i entered another one
this one was better i felt relieved
for i had seen myself again not in misery but on a throne
It was a marvelous sight
i stayed there for a long time
And forgot everything about the previous door
Something then went wrong
the other door got jealous and ruined my life
It had ruined everything
My sagacity my rule
then i was drowning in a deep sea
After a reached another world
i cried and wished to have given some significance
to the truth which lay beyond the door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 07 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Sana. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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